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Now, the ups: I liked the right eye and the nose-mouth region. I always have many problems with this. I like how the ear was drawn, the only problem I see with that is the one I already said. The hair is nice and flowing and the suggestion of the chest looks right to me.
About the stars: 5 stars in "vision" because I don't know if it's relevant here (it's an OC portrait, after all, so, I don't think it has to be visionary). I gave 5 stars, so it will not mess with the other fields.
3 stars and a half on originality because that's a common pose and I just felt bad giving 5 stars to it. But don't think that it's a defect in this art. Like I said above, it's an OC portrait, almost a study, and it does its job very well. I do this kind of drawing sometimes, and I know that, more than the originality of pose and of the technique, what really matters is putting the OC face on paper.
3 stars and a half because of the things I pointed. But don't be fooled, people, I don't think I can do any better than her. I suck at anatomy. I just like to be fair in my evaluations, so, I can't give more than that in this field.
5 stars in impact because I really liked his expression. I caught myself wondering how Janus could be, what's his personality and such, so, I guess the impact was just right.
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